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“Hey [Name], do you love me?” Your boyfriend Makoto unsurely asked.

You looked up from the soup you were making and frowned.

“Makoto, if I didn’t love you would I be here taking care of you..? Would I have even agreed to go out with you?” You sighed.

“I guess you wouldn’t..” He said dreamily.

Makoto was always worried that you’d leave him. You didn’t understand it. You huffed and turned back to your soup.  Makoto had caught the flu and since his family was out of town, you had come over to take care of him. You brought a spoon filled with broth up to your lips to taste the soup.

“Hot hot hot HOT!!” You yelled when it burned your tongue.

Makoto chuckled at your actions but soon began to cough. You rushed to his side with a glass of water which he quickly drank.

“Take it easy. Your soup will be done soon.” You said while pressing your hand to his forehead.‘Damn,’ you thought, ‘he still has a fever…’

You stood up and walked back over to the stove and turned off one of the burners. [That’s what they’re called right?] You grabbed a bowl from one of the cabinets and poured some of the steaming soup into it. Makoto coughed once again causing you to flinch. You picked out the bowl and grabbed a spoon. Makoto gave a weak smile when he saw you approaching him. You set the bowl down on the table closest to him, sat down, and gave Makoto a wide smile.

“Here you go! My mom’s special chicken noodle soup recipe!! It’ll make you better in no time!” You beamed proud of your work.

He laughed and reached for the soup but had another coughing fit. You frowned.

“Do you want me to feed you Makoto?” You asked.

He nodded and sat up. You took the bowl off of the table and put it in your lap. You carefully put the spoon to Makoto’s lips as he sucked the broth up.

“Is it any good?” You asked a hopeful look in your [e/c] eyes.

“Yeah, it’s delicious!”  He smiled.

You continued the process until the soup was all gone. ‘I have to leave soon..’ you thought as you looked at the clock. You got up and began to clean the kitchen as Makoto’s green eyes watched you. Satisfied with your work, you began to pack your things.  Once you were done you turned to Makoto.

“Before I leave, remember to take the red pills once every 12 hours and if you’re feeling hot get a wet washcloth and put it on your forehead. Call me if there are any probl-mmmphh!” You were cut off by Makoto’s soft lips.

“I love you [Name]..” He said staring into your eyes.

“I-I love you too, but I may get sick!!” You grumbled.




-3 Weeks Later-




You coughed again as Makoto came to your aid.

“Are you ok, [Name]?” He said with concern flickering in his gaze.

“All I have to say is I told you so..” You muttered grumpily.
More fluff!! I think that Makoto would be a bit unconfident..but that's just me!! Yes, I'll be writing more Free! fanfictions soon!!
I'm thinking making an Attack on Titan reader insert where you [the reader] gets a harem, but I'm not quite sure yet.... Anyways, the next thing I'm doing is Item [3] so keep an eye open for that!!

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:icondreamalittledaydream:
*heavy breathing* This was sooo cutee~ <3
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FrancyKirkland Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2015  Student General Artist
kawii
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onepiecegoat Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015  New member
I too, like Kiwis!
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FrancyKirkland Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015  Student General Artist
Happy Star icon 
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onepiecegoat Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2015  New member
xD
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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:iconfrancykirkland:
FrancyKirkland Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015  Student General Artist
hehe
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Senpai-Toonney Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  New member Hobbyist General Artist
such a great story!

Amazing!

BUENO

(some other words)

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i sorry ill stop now
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Thecrazytardis5 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
AWW!!!!
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SoulsGF Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Reader-Chan told you Makoto!
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LiveLaughNLove Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014
this was adOraBLE?1 :iconsqueeeeplz:
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minsugaaar Featured By Owner May 28, 2014
this is so cute o//3//o
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Jordypye Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Makoto! :D This is great :3
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SilverPhoenix14 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
so  cute o3o
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:iconmomokitty27:
momokitty27 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Student Writer
This was so sweet! I love Mako-chan!
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ivyandtwine Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
he's adorable and this was really sweet! good job!
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Nat-Contreras1999 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this story!!!! Makoto is my fav character!!!! It's just to cute!!!!!!! >///<
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zendeya67 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Student Writer
I really like this my fave characters from Free! Is Haru buuuut I really like Makoto too cuz he's hot and and REALLY CUTE!!And I asked my mom and yeah it's called burners (>^ω^<)♪
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SilverReira Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Student General Artist
The story is so great! :D
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gfftfg Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks!^^
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Kawaii-Amethyst-chan Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww.... Kawaii... I really like your stories....
May I request you to write a Free! [Reader x Various].... Please? It is okay if you don't want to...
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gfftfg Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Student Writer
Ah~ I'm sorry but I'm going to have to say no... I'm busy with some other things I'm working on now!! Thanks for your suggestion
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Kawaii-Amethyst-chan Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It is okay!!! You just do what you need to do... I'm looking forward to your stories... XD
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MrsTategami Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Aww this is way To adorable!
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gfftfg Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks!
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MrsTategami Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Np
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ForsakenSacrifice Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student Artist
Kyaaaaaa, I love this so much, you can't understand.
-Flails and nosebleeds.-
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gfftfg Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student Writer
Haha~ Here --------> :icontissuesplz:
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agatstone Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013
this was really great
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tiedye-hippie Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student Writer
Oh so cute~ :D
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gfftfg Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks!
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little-soka Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student Writer
aww! this was so cute! :iconyuikyaaplz:
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gfftfg Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks~ :iconyuihugplz:
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Nat-The-Alley-Cat Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Student Writer
Oh my gosh! This is so cute! I just kinda :iconcannotevenplz: and :iconkermityayplz: at the same time...
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gfftfg Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student Writer
Hahaha! Thanks!
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Nat-The-Alley-Cat Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student Writer
Haha, no problem it was great! =D
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poptar27 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

>///<

 

omg omg omg

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gfftfg Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Student Writer
I take it you enjoyed..? X3
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poptar27 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

very creative and cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >///<

can't imagine myself there tho lol

but YES i did omg i luv it!!!!!!

fluff fluff

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LikaTheLunchen Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
“Hey [Name], do you love me?”
Me: OMG YEEEEEEEEEES OF COURSE I LOVE YOU MARRY MEEEEEEEEEEEE I WANT YOUR BABIES MAKOTO ASBDHKASF
Haha, i always burn my tongue when i eat soup. That's one thing i hate about soup xD
I DON'T CARE IF I GET SICK AS LONG AS MAKOTO LOVES ME :iconinuheheheplz:
Makoto is such a cutie, it kinda hurts that he's not real qwq
Looooove the story :iconinuhappyplz:
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gfftfg Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Student Writer
Haha~
Me too!! The soup gods hate me....

He really is...

Thanks!




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AriesGoddessofWar Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Ooooo this was so adorable!!! :happybounce:
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gfftfg Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks!
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AriesGoddessofWar Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Student General Artist
You're welcome! :D
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otaku-wolfs-xD Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
Dawww cute!!!
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gfftfg Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks!
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otaku-wolfs-xD Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
your welcome!
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MinimandyxGrimjr Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Why does this make me laugh? XD Especially the ending xD 
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gfftfg Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Student Writer
I'm glad you find it humorous! [it was intended to be..]
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MinimandyxGrimjr Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And yet it's fluffy .3. FLUMOROUS! New word .3.
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gfftfg Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Student Writer
Hahaha~
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